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     CommentAuthorDizz
   • CommentTimeOct 8th 2007

    # 1

   This is WIP is just a development on where my style is slowly progressing, however I'm not entirely sure waht to place in the background to make the Image stand out, or whether the image even needs a background. Any comments and crits are hugley welcome.

   
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     CommentAuthorMachineAbuse
   • CommentTimeOct 8th 2007

    # 2

   I think it's pretty badassed diz the metacarpus bones in her hand should be fleshed out a little more, along with the crease between the two radialis muscles in the forearm, that will maker her arm less 'meaty' looking. I reckon you can move her bangle down a little and bump up her ulna and radius where they meet the carpus just to get a little more out of the hand.

   Flesh out her sternomastoids a little too, her neck seems a little linear without them.

   Apart from that perhaps a little more loving in her drapery and some lighter values on the 'thingy' she's holding. A strategic crease at the bottom of her butt might work nyuk nyuk! ;D

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     CommentAuthorrayk
   • CommentTimeOct 8th 2007

    # 3

   Hey Diz. Nice to see you posting - not only that but posting quality stuff !

   Not much more to add to shakken (MachineAbuse) in terms of figure, but I think if you are looking to make her pop out more then work in a cool colour into the background like blue or purple (maybe add a hint of green too for a more eery effect). Currently the background is a warmer colour then the figure so my eye keeps getting drawn away to it from her. I'd also make the highlights on the skin a little brighter in some spots, just to give her a little bit more contrast (don't overdo this though )

   Anyway, looking good. Post some more stuff

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     CommentAuthorDizz
   • CommentTimeDec 30th 2007

    # 4

   I've finally finished. Thanks for the great feed back and critique, it helped alot.