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1. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 2nd 2009

    # 11

   some more anat sketches did today

   
2. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 3rd 2009

    # 12

   proportion you have to fix that

   
3. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 13th 2009

    # 13

   

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009

    # 14

   Here is an update on one of my WIPs, it's nearing towards finished so I'm gonna set it aside for a bit and hopefully get some feedback.

   
5. •  
     CommentAuthorPeter
   • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009

    # 15

   yay that last one looks pretty amazing mate one thing I noticed on this landscape painting - the cold vs warm here is not in right relationship - the cold colors are too much depending of the red planet ( satellite ) the warm light should reflect one the cold surface and on some of the folds, compared with the night light of the moon which is so small satellite of the earth it's light reflecting on any surfaces, so this close distance should reflecting the light of the red planet that's my opinion hope it make sense cuz how much I am writing that much I dunno what I am talking :P
   cheers!

6. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 20th 2009

    # 16

   Thanks man, now you mention it yes there should be more warm light pooling in from the planet. I think next time I touch that painting I will shift the ground a little more towards red/purple to tie the moon in a little better.

   Here is another WIP:

   
7. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 21st 2009

    # 17

   the moon one I think you need a bit more balance, the red moon takes most of the focus which cause the right hand side of the picture is too heavy, and for story purpose I think you need something on the ground to create some fun and deep to the picture, O just do a quick one, shit color through but give you some ideas

   the space one I think character in front can have more depth and draw girls man they look better with tight space suit, and in front should be cooler and darker I guess

   
   
8. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 27th 2009 edited

    # 18

   Thanks for the crits Herman, very helpful!

   I think I will call that planetscape done, need to move on to other stuff - like that pic from first post, decided to continue with it (still wip till next weekend, I haven't really touched the center piano bit yet ).

   
   
   
9. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 27th 2009

    # 19

   great update man, the second one has good design, but I feel I get lost in the picture as the the light don't let me settle down on a major place, the top part and guy with red pans, and the front 2 characters and the middle box both of them share same importance which make me feel confuse, the last piece is nicer now much more balanced

   again post the ref for that girl so we can critique, but base on the post you have improvement on the proportion man

10. •  
      CommentAuthorパベル
    • CommentTimeOct 3rd 2009

     # 20

    Thanks for the help herman, I have it finally done!

    I thought I'd put together a process strip in case it helps anyone. Personally I find it helps when I start to make sure I establish a 3 dimensional space while I work abstractly to establish the image itself. It really helps to have an idea of what you want to do before you start, so you don't wander around aimlessly, however getting attached to something too strongly will probably hold you back on the potential you can achieve by exploring around. For this image I just had an idea of a piano in a cave.

    Also initial block in for another wip, I try to keep a few wip around so I don't get bogged down on one of them. That way I can also look at each one with fresh eyes when I come back to work on it. Hope to post some studies next!