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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeNov 5th 2009

    # 41

   good you get the things more and more accurate, but the last one you fail really bad on her right leg, I post critiques on the top girls i think having serious problems, on the posts you don't draw very often you usually do bad, I think on those complicated posts you should spend more time on searching the form right not just throw in nice lines, I will critique the last 2 you have done later, mainly look at want directions the legs and arms are pointing to

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeNov 7th 2009

    # 42

   Man, you always make it look so easy ! Cheers, here are some more for you to laugh at haha

   
3. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeNov 8th 2009

    # 43

   I think you start need to look at muscle don't need to draw whole body like i did ,just pick a hand or just part of the body and follow anatomy textbook to put muscle there

   
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     CommentAuthorrmangano
   • CommentTimeNov 9th 2009

    # 44

   Hi rayk, your figures are getting better. I think your proportions are still a little bit off though, it seems to mainly be with the legs and torso in your last few pictures, they seem a little short. And I agree with herman about the muscles, knowing where they are will help you analyze what is going on in the pose.

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeNov 10th 2009

    # 45

   left hand side that girl you need to take care how legs and how they land on the ground, and should spend some time on the anatomy on legs, right one you need to look at her feet but in general it is not bad

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeNov 19th 2009

    # 46

   Thanks guys! I've tried putting in the muscles in these ones I feel I might have exaggerated the head size in these a little too much though...

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeNov 26th 2009

    # 47

   Hey guys, some updates on a early paint that I've decided to bring to finish. So a work in progress. Please crit

   
8. •  
     CommentAuthorrmangano
   • CommentTimeDec 5th 2009

    # 48

   Hi Rayk, One thing i noticed was that my eye kept jumping from above the bridge/tree to underneath it then back up again rather than looking around the picture in a comfortable way. Also there seems to be alot of the same green everywhere, so it need more colours, or some more variation? :p

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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeDec 12th 2009

    # 49

   Thanks rob, I'll be revisiting the eye flow next time I iterate on it.

   Some anat studies from me, these ones killed... but I did pick the hardest ones for myself.

   
10. •  
      CommentAuthorPeter
    • CommentTimeDec 13th 2009

     # 50

    hi rayk, I noticed some issues with the negative shapes, try to be more accurate on these shapes and to add that on the first figure you did the face line is different of the reffed one.
    best regards!