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Works in Progress & Critique: Ghost Girl and Zombie Boy

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      CommentAuthorThunder
    • CommentTimeDec 19th 2007
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    Righto, drew this on a whim one day, decided I liked it, and digitized it. This is what I've got so far. A guy with his arms sticking out and a floating girl. They... aren't really a ghost or a zombie... I lied. )=

    I'm in the process of figuring out a background, so I have one roughed in. If I decide to stick with this idea I plan to change the railing to something more modern (I was going to make it heavily greek inspired, but then realized it wouldn't really fit with the guy and girl... who are obviously wearing modern day clothing), put a silhouette of a city in the background to the left, add some whispyish clouds, and, uh... make the trees look less like green blobs. Well, thats an idea. o_O

    And since its completely digital now (I even inked it on the computer -yeech), I can go in and tinker with everything. I still have my doubts about his foreshortened hand and her legs, and his face has started looking kinda funny to me. =\

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    Hehe, they're so fun. :3 They do look a bit off, but I've just attributed that to their (un)deadness. I like the shading so far and I especially like the detailing on their pants. Pants are way cool.

    Umm, I could try to give some constructive crits, but I don't know how helpful they'd be... I think you got her legs right and it might just seem odd since she appears to have no feet. I think you got the shape on his hand right too, but the finger nail placement, especially on the middle finger, makes it look kinda like it's sticking straight out or up. His other hand actually looks like it needs more attention to me than the foreshortened one. D= I feel so wrong trying to give critiques when I know I can't draw that well. I'm sorry.

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      CommentAuthorThunder
    • CommentTimeDec 21st 2007
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    Hey Star, thanks. Don't feel bad about giving critiques if you can't draw as well. That doesn't mean you can't spot things that are off!

    And I think you bring up a good point about the finger nails. And speaking of his other hand, I've noticed that his arm looks wonky... like, the lines seem crooked. o.O Or maybe thats the shading... But I shall investigate. =3

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    Alrighty then. >__< Now if only I could figure out how to correct things that look off.
    I'm glad to try to help. I didn't notice that about his other arm either... 'tis very slight. I think you may be right about it just being the shading. *imagines Thundie off to investigate with a trenchcoat and magnifying glass*

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