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1. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeAug 30th 2009

    # 11

   more

   
   
   
   
   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeAug 31st 2009

    # 12

   EEEEPPIIIIIIIC (I think I need to make an emoticon to express this).

   Colour is looking better, you could probably push the darks/cools a little on the soldier guy, otherwise the other colour pieces are much better than previous stuff! . The sketchbook pages, well AWESOME lots of good stuff, love it all.

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 1st 2009 edited

    # 13

   thanks rayk, for a long time fucking up my art, I figure out 1 thing I am line guy without line I am nothing, direct paint is not suitable to me, speed paint is not suitable to me, more I paint more I fuck up the form and design is shit, so I think I need is color my line work better not paint color better lol, thanks for your critiques give me more, I will try to give you some

   
   
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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 2nd 2009

    # 14

   a bit more

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 2nd 2009 edited

    # 15

   Hey man, here is a paintover from me: Even if you are keeping your line art which is fine, still try to work globally and then down. Establish the overall mood and place first, that will make your life finishing the character off so much easier as you will have something to key it to.

   Also note that I'm painting with a fairly big brush and putting down the least strokes I need, helps to keep the painting from becoming too busy too soon, and also lets you put the small details on parts where you want to focus.

   
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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 16th 2009

    # 16

   thanks for your crits man I will use that method on the coming one, by the way those 4 thumbnails which one looks better as a 1930 super villain, more crits thanks!!

   
   
   
   
   
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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 16th 2009

    # 17

   another environment thumbnails crits please

   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 16th 2009

    # 18

   Hey I think the one on right of first row is probably the more 1930 villain out of those, plus it's the one that reads the best.

   Colour is looking better, it's starting to be more balanced but still some palces you can use a bit more cools - like the first colour image, places like her neck and upper chest that shadow could be a little cooler to really push the contrast a bit.

   Cool stuff all around, needs more :P

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 17th 2009 edited

    # 19

   thanks I will keep that in mind, a new way to paint a still image under normal light source end up the light keep changing lol and kind of fail it

   
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      CommentAuthorPeter
    • CommentTimeSep 17th 2009 edited

     # 20

    nice try Herman two things came out my mined looking the last one:
    1st - the perspective of the cup is kind of wrong
    2nd - the composition right now with these strokes (everything with same brush) are hard to read, cuz everything looks kind of soft ..I know this is a WIP but that's come to my mind almost to forgot the drapery doesn't read well too
    keep showing mate, looking forward to see what's next :P