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1. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 17th 2009 edited

    # 21

   thanks peter it is a terrible still image painting just try a new tech, I will do a better one tomorrow I promise haha, new draft of that 1930 super villain character

   
2. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009

    # 22

   environment design

   
   
3. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009

    # 23

   character

   
4. •  
     CommentAuthorPeter
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009

    # 24

   nice character design Herman, looking good so far. I think you may continue the ground behind the woman cuz in this stage it's like she's falling down - the weight on the body is on her upper part so the foreshortening looks kind of weird best regards ~Peter

5. •  
     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009

    # 25

   I reexamine the post and I think it is fine to me man but still thanks for crit

   
   
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     CommentAuthorPeter
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009 edited

    # 26

   hello again, dunno man it's only opinion but this legs looks really weird to me - in that foreshortening her left leg looks thinner and smaller than her right leg - it's only opinion keep up the good work!!!
   * and why the hell you kill superman? does she shot him with kriptonite bullets???

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeSep 18th 2009 edited

    # 27

   because she steps on the head of superman, it is superman because II hate all hero dress underwear outside, another quick color exercise from mind

   
8. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009 edited

    # 28

   

   Nice man nice, good to see some cools in that last one!

   With that environment, I think there is a bit of conflict going on with the lighting. Especially the light that pooling in on the left really takes your eye away from the rest of picture so you don't get a good eye flow. I think if you simplified the lighting a bit and made it point at the key visual area it would help to make the picture read a bit better.

   Here is a very loose paint of what I mean (I had a bit of trouble with it), there is one light coming in from above dappling the main part of the painting (dragons being sliced), the rest of the picture is lit cool with some mist. I think the mood in my paintover is a bit conflicting with what you are going with, so you might want to disregard that part.

   
9. •  
     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009

    # 29

   Also with he villain picture, I agree with Peter, the foreshortening on the right leg thigh (for us) looks a bit slimmer compared to the left leg. Considering how fat her left thigh is, I think the right thigh would droop down somewhat and be a bit bigger.

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      CommentAuthorPeter
    • CommentTimeSep 19th 2009 edited

     # 30

    oh man that last one is kick ass, love the rendering wish I can color like you no crits for trhe moment!
    * maybe you can saturate a bit more the reflected light on her left leg