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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeNov 25th 2009

    # 81

   hi Peter and Robert and Devin thanks for great critiques I, Devin you gave me some in depth stuffs to think about, I will do some studies which will base on what you guys mention and show here later on, give me some time to digest, by the way this is another 2 thumbs about environment of The Caravan this week eow in concept art, which one you feel better again critiques are most welcome

   
   
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     CommentAuthorパベル
   • CommentTimeNov 25th 2009

    # 82

   The second rough is by far more interesting than the first, you might need a tiny little bit more value separation in the sky, other than that the values look fine - getting it in colour will be very interesting .

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     CommentAuthorrmangano
   • CommentTimeDec 5th 2009

    # 83

   I actually think the first is far more interesting than the second. The second one seems sparse in comparison, there is alot of empty space with not a great deal to see. The focus seems on that cow creature pulling the wagon rather than on the environment itself. Where as your first one you pay more attention to the actual environment and the characters are secondary if you notice them at all.

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     CommentAuthorPeter
   • CommentTimeDec 5th 2009

    # 84

   hi mate, I am agree with both Robert and rayk ,in my opinion it's no matter which one will you start developing. the important is to make it to the stage which will telling us a story.and both of these pictures need some touches on the values like rayk already mention the sky needs more values.looking forward to see the story!

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeDec 15th 2009

    # 85

   some random updates, draw a lot with sketchbook recently and so many things have happened, don't want to get deleted so some updates here I will post more and scan my sketchbook later on if I am not too busy, the color monster is collaboration with Devin, which girl is your favorite for thee Hong Kong soccer girl character?

   
   
   
   
   
   
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     CommentAuthorrmangano
   • CommentTimeDec 15th 2009

    # 86

   Hi Herman, not alot to say about the monsters, they look interesting. With the soccer girls, I personally like the first, and the last two. And with your study you missed that big shadow on the rock right in the middle bottom part, and there is alot of red in your shadows compared to the reference.

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeDec 23rd 2009

    # 87

   thanks Robert, I figure out quick study I learn small from it, I spend more time to get the value right this time

   
   
   
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     CommentAuthorMoojuice
   • CommentTimeDec 23rd 2009

    # 88

   Hey Herman,

   Great colour studies, i see your values are improving. Although you seem to replace some colours in your studies like the cliffs having a very saturated purple in them but instead its greyish blue and the ocean in the last one having again, very saturated purple where as its a very saturated dark green.

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     CommentAuthorherman
   • CommentTimeDec 28th 2009

    # 89

   thanks moojuice, I will try to get closer to the reference next time and take care the cool dark part in my drawing

   really have busy time recently well still trying to push up some studies

   the cats one is the logo for my team chow as Devin is sick so I have to take over it and finish it myself, Devin when you gets online lol !!!!

   the girl one is second drawing from my tablet PC it looks shit lol

   the other one is light and composition study

   all wip

   
   
   
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      CommentAuthorherman
    • CommentTimeDec 31st 2009

     # 90

    this is final logo